Lol! We are the mega earthworms!! muhahaha!!..

I would laugh so hard if we both made it on the top rated recent poems!.. heheh

I loved it! i really don't know what to say about it tho, i'm kind of speechless..It was a great piece yall did beautifully!!!5/5

You two did an amazing job. this is so insprirational in so many ways. it is really helping my outlook on life right now because i'm in some really rough times right now. you should write more poems/lyics like this.

jamie

p.s.
i saw your thing in the forum. can you do two of my feartured poems. thank you!

=O! booger head! this is amazing.

you guys did a GREAT job. you really did. =)

it's very inspirational. in writing and in life. ;)

I LOVE YOU! AND MISS YOU!

*GIANT bear hugs*

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Amazing! This was very beautiful!! You are both amazing writers. It had a great message!! I loved it! I don't really have anything else to say.

Awwww omg i love this. it made me smile :]. thanks for writing it cause i'm having a really bad day and this just made me kind of happy. your such a great writer. keep it up. 5/5

Howdy howdy, you can pass this comment on to Darien too. My only suggestion is to move the bridge, I felt like it could go before verse 4 instead of so early... I've always felt that bridges are the most effective before the final verse of the song for dramatic effect. Good poem/lyrics... I like the little []'ed phrases in the verses.

Wow.. that is really good. It would definitely make a great song. It gives you a great sense of courage and ability to move on and not care what other people think. Great job on this! 5/5

PREETTTTYYYYY! its so.....inspiring. whoops, almost spelled dat wrong. did i spell that wrong?!?! newayz, beautifully written. too bad its not an actual song so dat i cud dl it n put it in my ipod....pity, lol

Natalie,
I think you and Darien did a wonderful job on this. The lyrics are inspirational and work well. It would make a really good song! Great job.

**Samantha Hollywood

I have one thing to say ,,, thank you so much . i think that will help me throu whay i am in. Great job

As a song lyric I can't help feeling that the use of "the crowd" as a phrase would actually leave a listener alienated by this.

Good chorus though.

Another wonderfully written.
I think this would make a truly great poem. 5/5