Dear Life: Letters of the Lost

by Poetess Lana   Jun 28, 2006


Dear Life,
I hate you. Please die.
Love, my empty heart.

Dear Death,
Take me now, away from
this cold unfeeling world.
Love, my soon lost soul.

Dear Soul,
You are already gone, but
I can't say I miss you.
Love, your previous body.

The letters of the lost,
sending out a signal to
the world and their once-
loved ones.

Dear Love,
You always hated me.
Why?
Signed, my always broken
heart.

Now tell me:
Which letter are you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I loved how you did this one! I REALLY LOVED THE ENDING!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    I must say, I liked it up to the last two lines. The last two lines were just too cliche for me. I think it is better without them because then people automatically empathize with all of them.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Can I say all...? Great job as always hun... keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Omg i love this peom!
    its so well written and i loved how you had love on the last line and how you repeted but changed the verses =]
    greatwrite!
    your an amazing poet!
    5/5
    i wish i could give you more!
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxx

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