Destroying Freedom of Speech

by LadyPearl   Jun 28, 2006


From comments from my latest poems-with some added words
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You shouldn't write about things you don't know
You're just a stereotypical teen
Who knows nothing of why we cut
You have no right to tell us to get off our butt

You're just a close minded teen about the war
You wouldn't be here if it wasn't for Bush
I'm for the war, you one-minded freak
Your mind and heart is nothing but bleak

My poems now are all downvoted
From high 5.0 to 4.0 or below
You think this will shut me up tight
Well you're wrong cause I'm here to fight

You've got a problem with my beliefs
I never said you had to believe them too
Oh, but you get all offensive up in my face
You think you can slow down my writing pace

You guys are all so hilarious funny
To see your enraged reaction at me
To come to conclusions without confirmation
You really do know how to put up a great reaction

Go ahead and downvote me all the way
There's always gonna be people who agree with me
Right now, there's more people that agree
Doesn't that tell you something about my honesty

Go ahead and downvote this poem
I know you want, as you always have
This must be the 5th time it's happened to me
In truth, I'm getting use to it quite nicely

Oh, you know how to make me laugh
You know how to put a smirk on my face
To be able to make somebody mad by a few words
Shows you what's happening to this world

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  • 18 years ago

    by k

    I think this poem has some excellent points. GOd i've read some topics on here, explicit poems about all sorts of stuff that i would never imagine being rated a 5 but it is...therefore why should we not be able to express ourselves about anything we like here xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Great poem! I really thought it was good and original. Your thoughts were very strong in the poem, I definately knew how you felt. Keep up your good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Haha that was hilarious! I know how you feel, but it is pretty stupid all these people will downvote for no reason whatsoever...just b/c they are in a bad mood so they figure i can ruin it for everyone..but that's just fine b/c its starting not to bother me..you are right people agree with you, i completely agree with you...great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Great stuff, however.. I thought the title lacked a little bit. You should change it. When people look at the title of the poem, they expect something about the poem. The title gives it a sort of identity. That's the only thing I found, other than that, this was a great piece. So now I know what tickles your funny bone :P hehe

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