Thats such an amazing poem
i serioulsy mean it!
so sad =[
i like itbeacuse you have the image in your mind and it alows you to imagine the rest of the strory =]
great write =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxx

Wow! This was really good.

The imagry was fantastic!! The flow was a tiny rocky, but that doesn't matter, I thought it was a great poem, Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.