All i can say is this is amazing! i love the way it reads with the short lines, its so good!

these lines stand out to me the most,

"demons smiling
angels crying
we've lost another one Lord
another success Satan
one less Godly soldier"

your v talented, and this was a pleasure to read.

Wow... that was amazing. and if you want you can put that poem on your site! but no copy-write. lol. anyway, your poem was amazing, i absolutely loved it. so dark & perfect