Hun i love u sooooooo much just dont die please there are other people who love u too not just me i dont no who those people are because i dont live there just dont die. i already no 2 people who love you that are here and would cry so much if u died. im crying now as i write this and probally will be the rest of the day. im gonna come to u dont worry bout that. ill be there in a few days i dont no how im gonna get there but i will i need to save u. u came into my life and u made me trust again and so im gonna help u love again and you'll love some one who will love u back. just dont kill ur self befor i get there hun i love u soooooo much dont die

Wow thats really good. no its not good its AMAZING. But dont kill yourself. we all make mistakes that we regret. i have made tons but we have ppl who love and care about us. so dont get your hopes down. ok. great poem. please check out some of mine.

lots of love
hayley

Wow wut a good poem!

That was a nice yeah dont kill yourself ok weel talk to you latre

4m:amber

Wow deep words wow keep up the good work..

timehealsallwounds*

Hey man, life is a warzone, if you killyourself you will be getting out of to easy, take it from me, dont do it

:( that poem scared me.. ^..^ but if u become my friend i will help u out hehe

Look i know i already writen one comment but i lost a boyfriend 2 years ago in a car crash. i dont think i will love again. but plz be my friend.

I like it alot...seems uve got alotta emotions pent up inside that u need let out...thats what i interpereted anyways...keep it up!! 5/5
~ray

OMG i love it... hope nothing happend there tho.. that was well written... with emotion!

great poet xxxx i'll add you to my favourites xxx

Wow.. that showed a lot of emotion and depth. It was a very nice poem.. great work.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5