I like this! It does have simple rhyme (like Apathetic Soul said) , but whats wrong with that? I liked the rhyme in it. The poem was short and to the point. The strongest stanza in my opinion is the last one. It had a great end. I like the repitition of the title throughout the poem. Good write!

And you`ll shine like a star
Because music is your fate
[Loved those lines!]

Wow. Sam, This was great also. I liked the whole idea of standing up. Like getting the courage to do something. A really good insperational poem. Keep up your great work! You're a great writer!! 5/5 And thank you for your comment.

`Taleee. xx.

Beautiful job! Excellent flow

I think your poems are very sweet and I like them a lot. Keep um coming hun.

Ravyn

OMG! That was soooooo good, it was touching and inspiring and cute and beautiful and i loved it, and did i say it was inspiring. b/c yes yes it was!! awww i loved it..andddddd i love you definitely 5/5

A clear and effective rhyming pattern, the words fit really well together and the flow is smooth and flawless. a great read.

-biscuit-