BaNg;;BaNg; and you shot me down

by Elisa   Jun 28, 2006


I sit every night
holding my pillow tight
hoping your thinking
about me

but are you
is our love true
i sing
a sad melody

i know you don't think about me
and what used to be
if we were still there
i would show you i care

i don't know if my pain
is making you insane
but i know
that I'm going crazy

your favorite color is blue
and yes dreams come true
but don't forget
so do nightmares..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love this poem but i agree with narcissa that u should change that list line to nightmares to do it keeps the flowin the last stanza and finishes very strong over all great poem tho good job hun 5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi again, may i ask you a huge favor? PLEASE vote for my poems. PLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE

  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    "so do nightmares.." i would rather put this as "nightmares do to..."
    i dont know, i think makes the last verse rhime. but its your poem, nice work though

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