"so do nightmares.." i would rather put this as "nightmares do to..."
i dont know, i think makes the last verse rhime. but its your poem, nice work though

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I love this poem but i agree with narcissa that u should change that list line to nightmares to do it keeps the flowin the last stanza and finishes very strong over all great poem tho good job hun 5 from me