OMG lorna. What a sad poem. `I slid down the wall` can see it in my head clearly. So much sadness and longing. And you have brought it all to life within such a short poem. Clever. Hope this is you being creative and not really going through that nightmare, heartache of a split up. % out of 5 (Again!!!)

This is sad. This poems is short but o so powerful. So much feelings. I like this poem. You did a great job.