by SilenceBreaksTheHeart Jun 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Life is good when I look in your eyes. |
by Midnight Sun
I think you and the two line stanzas are a perfect match. Great job...I wish I had written the line, "To hold your hand is my biggest desire, when you touch my face my heart catches fire." That was incredible. Great write! 5/5 |
by Miss Megan
Loveee this poem-you;re a great writer-thanks SOOO much for the comments on mine-normally my poems are MUCH longer-but i was experimenting with a few of them-i likee longer ones better-but their harder to write for me lately-thanks again-kepp up the great job!! [megg] :] |
by ♥?♥
GREAT POEM |
by xxmichaelxx
You really write good. really awesome. keep it up breanna. |
by DreamAwish
Ur poem described the feelings of someone whn he loves a person so much & how it makes him feel.. well done :) I liked it |