My Love for You

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jun 28, 2006


Life is good when I look in your eyes.
When I see your face my pain just dies.

It's like balm on my soul to hear your voice.
When you say my name I wanna rejoice.

To hold your hand is my biggest desire,
when you touch my face my heart catches fire.

I love your black hair and your beautiful face.
In my heart you hold a special place.

There could never be another man for me,
to my heart you hold the key.

Words can't even explain how I feel,
my love for you is so great it's unreal.

If you just ask you can have my body and soul.
To love you forever is my only goal.

Everything about you is just perfection.
I bestow on you my most precious affection.

I've said all there is I can say,
my love for you grows each and every day.

All you have to do is say you love me too
and to you, my baby, I'll always stay true.

****Finally I wrote a happy poem :D I've found that I'm just not very good at that. But please leave comments it means so much to me. I'll return the favor. Thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think you and the two line stanzas are a perfect match. Great job...I wish I had written the line, "To hold your hand is my biggest desire, when you touch my face my heart catches fire." That was incredible. Great write! 5/5
    ~Jules
    p.s. I find myself giving you 5's A LOT! great job,lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Loveee this poem-you;re a great writer-thanks SOOO much for the comments on mine-normally my poems are MUCH longer-but i was experimenting with a few of them-i likee longer ones better-but their harder to write for me lately-thanks again-kepp up the great job!! [megg] :]

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    GREAT POEM

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    You really write good. really awesome. keep it up breanna.

    Adrian ('',)

  • 18 years ago

    by DreamAwish

    Ur poem described the feelings of someone whn he loves a person so much & how it makes him feel.. well done :) I liked it

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