Its awesome! so much better than mines! U rock ight! keep on writing..

Great poem i loved it!

Nice poem i really puts meaning into it... keep up the good work

Aww this is really sweet. Great rhyme and flow. (I thought it was in iambic pentameter at first...but great syllable usage. It helps with the flow.)

5/5

joy*:.xx

I think this poem is pretty good, I liked the rhyming, and the lines were very sweet. I've been writing sad poems lately, they're addictive...so I know what you mean, sometimes it's hard to write happy things. But this one is really good.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Love de poem

Ur poem described the feelings of someone whn he loves a person so much & how it makes him feel.. well done :) I liked it

You really write good. really awesome. keep it up breanna.

Adrian ('',)

GREAT POEM

Loveee this poem-you;re a great writer-thanks SOOO much for the comments on mine-normally my poems are MUCH longer-but i was experimenting with a few of them-i likee longer ones better-but their harder to write for me lately-thanks again-kepp up the great job!! [megg] :]

I think you and the two line stanzas are a perfect match. Great job...I wish I had written the line, "To hold your hand is my biggest desire, when you touch my face my heart catches fire." That was incredible. Great write! 5/5
~Jules
p.s. I find myself giving you 5's A LOT! great job,lol.