Hey hun! just returnung the favor.. that was a sad/ really good poem! i enjoyed every word written! keep it up
love always aLi

This was a greta expression of emotions. A very good poem, not many people can pull off the non-rhyming poems but you did wonderfully. excellent job. And thanks for your comment.

(would've never noticed the "to" and "two" thing haha)

WOW! I felt like I was reading a story which is why I liked this poem so much! It was quite sad and makes me really relate because my best friend is so oblivious to things I deal with sometimes and it does make you wonder "why even be here when no one sees my pain"..you descirbed the characters feelings very well! Nice poem!
-Chels

Wonderful poem, It really represents that often the people we least expect are the ones who need our help. Great job.

xoxoxo Haley

ps thank you for the comment

Hey thx 4 the pointers on my poem they helped heaps! gr8 poem btw, i loved it! 5/5

Thanks again for the comments. You did a great job with this. I loved how you made it into a story but still kept it a poem.