by Twisted Heart Jun 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
It's quiet now, everyone has come and gone |
by ReBecca
Absolutely Great!! That was awesome. I enjoyed it from the first line to the last. And it was so poignant and beautifully sad. Well done. |
by Midnight Sun
Comment #4: |
This is great and spookey and this also |
by Connie
All I can say is that I completely agree with everyone's comments ~ wow, what a well written poem!! Kept me in suspense until the very end ~ great job! |
Wow amazing job. I saw this poem under the contest page and although normally I dont comment on thoes I just had to leave a message for this one. This was so original and deep. I love the last verse, very intersting and powerful the sence of loss and sadness that seems to loom over this house is very amazing. Wonderful job. 5/5 |