4/5.. I got lost up there so Im just gonna comment... What were you 2 fighting about anyways? Sounds like perfectness..

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It's a good poem and I like how you two wrote t together but the problem people might get lost is that there are some grammar things you might want to fix to seperate sentences.

It is a good poem, and it's good to see you can settle your arguements still smiling. Good stuff!

Absolutely brilliant, you have alot of talent, please keep writing
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Nelle i love that poem