I really like it u should write more

Dang!!! I think this could be a song with
a few more verses added, making the chorus
out of these lines,
Cause youre my unsung hero
People find what you do easy
But theyre not looking through your eyes

A great read indeed and Write On,
Bogie

Definite song. It's cute.

The flow of this was perfect and it was so sweet. It could be a song, but I like it as a poem =)

"People find what you do easy
But theyre not looking through your eyes"

My favourite line. Very very cute indeed. 5/5

Em xXx

Very imaginatively done..Its like a genuine feelin or grattitude towards the person u really appreciate..

Yeah u shud write more coz i see a potential in you..