Goodbye to you

by eric   Jun 28, 2006


Make sure the noose is tight
make sure this feels right
make sure that its over a girl
make sure she knows she was your world
Make sure to leave her a letter
so when she reads it she'll feel better
be sure to mention the stars
and be sure to say "together they were ours"
but it doesnt matter what was ours
together we shared the same scars
i know my feelings are getting pretty cliché
but there staying the same in the worst kind of way
i tied the rope to the ceiling
its to bad my life lost all meaning
as i kicked out the chair
i could feel my lungs starting tear
well i guess this is the end
good-bye to you my special friend

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Wow. Such an emotional poem - so romantic, and yet tragic at the same time. It's brilliant how you can combine the two so obviously. Sorry I haven't been around and commenting for a while - but I'm back now, and this poem is superb! Great job, Eric! 5/5

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Happy but so sad:)

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Such a loss to you and your dear friend.