Omg wow. thats so deep and sad.. it made me sad when i read it.. i really like it... its so good. it has amazing rhythm to it.. u have talent.. keep writing.. 5/5
take care adn stay strong
angie

Wow i luv this is flows so good and has a deep as meaning...thanx for commenting on mine!! keep it up im gonna go read some of ya others now:P
bye and take care
x x xmoniquex x x