Messed up party

by Avrii Monrielle   Jun 28, 2006


I messed up your birthday
I swear it wasn't my fault
I wanted it to be a great day
My brother ruined it all

I feel like a jerk
I don't want to face you
I'm so ashamed
I don't know what to say or do

.. 2 be continued...

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  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    It's okay, but you kinda left it hanging there... Very short... but I liked it. I'd very much like to read the continueation...

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Anton

    Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    0.0 what'd you do?! anyway, wow nice starting, cant wait to hear the rest. congrats on gettin h/m in my contest. 5/5

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