by Joy Jun 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I see you two walking down the street, |
Omg I can relate to this one too! It hurst soo much! This was so beautiful though! I loved every bit of it! You did an excellent job!! |
by not a poet
Hmm yah, reading this i feel like the girl who is being looked at, the one with his arms around her, i know it hurts, but dont worry, someday things will be different! great poem, i really pictured it well! |
I loved that poem. It was so sad but so beautiful. I loved all the emotion it showed...I can kinda relate to it and it made me almost want to cry. Truly amazing poem, Great job! Keep it up. |
by Mousie
POOR JOY!! wow, nice one u described both of us in on poem!!! |