POOR JOY!! wow, nice one u described both of us in on poem!!!

SOMEDAY ER WILL COME TRUE!!! lol u got a better chance right now than i do!

ILU!!!!

~Kristen

I loved that poem. It was so sad but so beautiful. I loved all the emotion it showed...I can kinda relate to it and it made me almost want to cry. Truly amazing poem, Great job! Keep it up.
5/5
Breanna

Hmm yah, reading this i feel like the girl who is being looked at, the one with his arms around her, i know it hurts, but dont worry, someday things will be different! great poem, i really pictured it well!

Omg I can relate to this one too! It hurst soo much! This was so beautiful though! I loved every bit of it! You did an excellent job!!

Cayce x