by Some Random Human Jun 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Sometimes I see you, in the grocery store, |
Jeffrey! Great job with this one. I actually like it! Kidding, I have liked your others...I think. haha. Um. I think you should stick to rap though. Your good at him home dog. lol. |
by Sammib
Hey Jeff. Really enjoyed reading this. As Bre said... it flowed so nicely... something ppl can relate to. I like the little change in the middle, gives the poem some light and shade. Very nicely written. |
I loved that poem...I can really relate to it! It was so well written, flowed perfectly, and you had such a good choice of words. Beautiful poem, keep it up. |