Hey this is a really sad but beautiful poem... hope ur okaye hunni,, juz wana say if she did that to you , then your tears arnt worth it... |
......Because you placed so much emotion into it I will decline to comment on the structure, flow, etc. I will just state that though your words were simple they carried an effective weight. It was...really something sad...and...touching. No words can I offer that could be helpful to you in this dilemma. Nor even a sympathetic note could I write. It was a sad piece written. |