by Somber Esprit Jun 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
For the life we never had together |
by Claire Bear
Such a lovely poem, beutifully expressed, im sorry about you losing your father at such an early age. 5/5 |
by Rachel
Wow, what a powerful poem. I can't believe you wrote this when you were only 12?! Thats amazing! This poem made me so sad, and I can tell that you really have talent, even when you were 12! Keep up the good work, I gave it a 5/5. I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/rate them. Thanks alot! |
by Adelle
A lovely poem very emotional and shows a lot of talent for something written by a 12 year old. |
by sarah
Im so sorry, such an emotional piece, great job, keep writing and take care Sarah x |