Im so sorry, such an emotional piece, great job, keep writing and take care Sarah x

A lovely poem very emotional and shows a lot of talent for something written by a 12 year old.

Wow, what a powerful poem. I can't believe you wrote this when you were only 12?! Thats amazing! This poem made me so sad, and I can tell that you really have talent, even when you were 12! Keep up the good work, I gave it a 5/5. I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/rate them. Thanks alot!
Rachel

Such a lovely poem, beutifully expressed, im sorry about you losing your father at such an early age. 5/5