by Somber Esprit Jun 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I have nothing. |
by 4 track demo
I really really really want to like this piece and i do, i do, there isn't anything that is wrong with it at all, i just keep reading it over & over hoping for just a little more...oh the hell with it, maybe that was your intention |
by Adelle
A good piece the wording was good but the emotion wasen't quite there. |
Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us |