Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

A good piece the wording was good but the emotion wasen't quite there.

I really really really want to like this piece and i do, i do, there isn't anything that is wrong with it at all, i just keep reading it over & over hoping for just a little more...oh the hell with it, maybe that was your intention
great poem! HELL YEAH!