Broken Violin

by myshiningstar14   Jun 29, 2006


Strumming the pains of
my heart, with His fingers,
like the broken violin
that I am, and dipping the
broken pieces into His sweet
embrace.

Like a film without sound,
my life flashes before me,
each pain deeper still. So
He begins to thread me
back together and our
lives continue to collide.

My strings are broken, and
my wood is chipped. I'm a
broken violin, oh please
don't play me. I'm a broken
violin, please I need you.

Embracing my tear-patterned
face, and my punctured heart,
He simply smiles, and with
His humble eyes, He welcomes
me with open arms.

Like a silhouette that speaks not,
but still tells a story, His love
erases my pain and brings me
new life.

My paint is scratched and I'm
put of tune. I'm a broken violin,
oh how you've restored me. I'm
a broken violin please live in me.

**this is how I feel most f the time now, without my friends(PQ and PA) and I miss my baby but I will see him sooon. Thnxs for reading. love you all.

Lissa xoxox

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  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome i love it good job i think u did a very good job on it im gonna read more okay ttyl good job:d

    keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Yet another great poem omg your so good i want to read more but my computer is going weird so i'll try again tommorrow i wish i could read them all right now you must really love this guy
    your poems are sad yet sweet keep it up
    aunabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by cindie

    Great poem, i love it!
    *cindie*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryan

    Very nice poem i like how you related things, i could never do that in my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Wow!!! Amazing write, love!
    My favourite stanza:

    Like a film without sound,
    my life flashes before me,
    each pain deeper still. So
    He begins to thread me
    back together and our
    lives continue to collide.

    Loved the metaphors used in this piece, it really brought this piece to be so, well GREAT! Keep it up!!

    LOVE
    Lolli

    5/5