Wonderful! In my opinion this is an excellent poem I absolutely love the idea of comparing yourself to a broken violin. Creative much and I loves!

xoxoxo Haley

Wow Lissa. Thats a beautiful poem. Its so sweet. did you write that for your bf?? its so sweet. I love it. I hope you see him soon.

Love you too

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

This poem is from one of the deepest places of my heart. These words, echo and transcend all that I am. Please enjoy my heart and I hope that it will fill you with the best feeling there is, love.

Lissa xooxx

Wow, i really like this poem, great comparsion... excellent poem!!!

Its really good. how you can relate an instrument to life. i loved it.

:)

That is really really good i like i t alot.keep on righting them..

Holy lord.. im speechless..
i love these lines:

Embracing my tear-patterned
face, and my punctured heart,
He simply smiles, and with
His humble eyes, He welcomes
me with open arms

gonna check out some more..
dee

Great metaphors and the way you used language. Its great to find other people who understand the human face behind the poetry. Each word is like a new colour on a canvas, another piece of our soul. Keep your head high, and aim to get what you want out of life, don't settle for anything less. Good luck and keep on writing, your words are brilliant and so are your ideas!
kt

Wikkid poem
keep it up

Wow!!! Amazing write, love!
My favourite stanza:

Like a film without sound,
my life flashes before me,
each pain deeper still. So
He begins to thread me
back together and our
lives continue to collide.

Loved the metaphors used in this piece, it really brought this piece to be so, well GREAT! Keep it up!!

LOVE
Lolli

5/5

Very nice poem i like how you related things, i could never do that in my poems

Great poem, i love it!
*cindie*

Yet another great poem omg your so good i want to read more but my computer is going weird so i'll try again tommorrow i wish i could read them all right now you must really love this guy
your poems are sad yet sweet keep it up
aunabeth

This is awesome i love it good job i think u did a very good job on it im gonna read more okay ttyl good job:d

keenan