by facedownindirt Jun 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She looks at me, |
by amandaa
This is a good poem, hunny, I like it alot. I can tell you've been inspired. |
by Deana
Morgan I like to make honest comments, you are talented way beyond your years the only neg. I see are a few grammar and spelling errors they would be just quick corrections, but they would make your poem read so much better. I go back and edit mine a lot.Check my "celestial tears" and you will see what I mean. |
Wow this is like... perfect.. every word made sense together and it actually felt like i was there.... |