I liked this, as i was reading I could hear it being sung to music. I was really good, keep it up.

--Steph

PS. Thanks for the comment on my poem.

Not good at writting songs...This was a amazing..I love it...I thought the flow was there...the emotion was great...Great Job...
Emma 5/5

I really liked this one. Great rhyming and an excellent message! The verses maybe could've been a bit longer, because they're supposed to separate themselves from Verse 3, (which is generally called a "bridge" and sends out the strongest message of the song).

However, I LOVED IT!!

5/5

joy*:.xx

What you mean your not good at writting songs... this is good! I wish i could do the same! Well done! Oh, thanks for commenting on mine! Its really appreciated! *bow* thanks!

Beautiful chorus. Nice job

I love it, awesome Chorus

I liked this song. I could definently feel a rythem in it and I wish I could hear it to music. Keep it up!

I think your amazing at songs! I love singing them~