by facedownindirt Jun 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Well it's over now |
This is really veryyy heartbreakiing! it made my heart break just reading it! i can really relate to this poem.. and while reading it.. i just remember the feelings that i have felt.. it's like my heart was torn out of its place, thrown on to the ground, and stepped on... like it was nothing... just a meaningless piece of rubbish.. your choice of words are really great.. |
by Deana
This again was very good, Its so hard to let go of someone you really care about. A couple of minor spelling errors , try spell check, It just makes it read a little better, It was very heartfelt. |