Wonderful poem, I like your choice of words.

xoxoxo Haley

Antastic poem, def got my 5 vote,great job, keep writing and take care Sarah x

Soz meant Fantastic poem and I agree with uponfairywings,The wording you have used are great and it flows throughout perfectly. sarah x

I like this one, and can some-what relate in a way. I'm moving and won't see many people for a very long time, and a few are getting bitter for weird reasons...
Either way, I don't think I'm a huge fan of this particular rhyme sceme, then again I'm not used to it either

This poem is very well writen and thoughtout. Your choice of words was very .. unique and quite extrodinary.
You have a very good talent..

great job

[peace]*

Superb 5/5