That is veryyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyy sad!! I know many mother's who have had to go through that, and watching them every day...dear lord..it's even hard for me!! but i loved this poem! definitely 5/5

This is so sad! You did an amazing job portraying the emotions of the mother though. The flow is on target and I love that it's free verse---Great write-5/5 Keep it up

I would b crying my eyes out...and when i get older when i hav a son.....i hav to make sure tht is no achol at all

5/5 poem!!