Comments : Forever More

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Such a wonderful poem...very clearly stated...you wrote five poems in a day...keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really enojoyed this poem. It was very well written. I loved the descriptions. The rhymes were good. It flowed well.

    "But his love surely will last me forever."
    ^^ That line kind of confused me. I know what you mean, I guess it's just worded differently. Overall Great poem!