God I need you

by Nelle   Jun 29, 2006


Is this real or is this a dream
Please god give me answers from above
It feels like I'm living a lie
It feels like I'm about to die

I need to know, what is real and what is wrong
Why can't i see through the glass door
My head is spinning, and things are not clear
If i stand up i will fall on the floor

Is this reality, or imaginary
Could you let me know, god why this is happening
My heart is beating faster and faster
I really do feel like collapsing

What is wrong with me, what is this pain that i feel
It's like a hundred needles are stabbing me
I need to wake up from this dream, i need to be free
I need to know what I'm meant to be

God please pull me up from this tragedy
Make me see this is real, and that it is clear
Help me realize, this is now, and i am awake
God, please take away all of my fears

Reach for my hand, and pull me up to you
Take me from this hell hole, for heaven is what i adore
Let me be free, from all the tragedies
Make me feel What i should know is real

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that's really touching... I can somewhat relate... And i could feel your emotions.. nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, it seems you are in a terrible postition right now. You should really consider asking someone for help. And I don't mean therapy. Just talk to someone who can give you advice, maybe someone who wenth through this. Or someone older, who could help. I don't know, just upsetting seeing all of this, and thinking something might be wrong with you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it is a great poem, honestly it is one of the poems that i always remember. great job,5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    WOW this is a heart touchin piece i really enjoyed readin it.
    i cant write too much tho coz there's nothing wrong with it he he.

    but top marks frome me nelly.

    5/5

    gema 20 in cheshire

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5.. Great poem Nelle! Just Loved IT~

    ~4ever

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