Aw, very sad. Well written though. If this is a true story im sorry for your loss. I think you should aslo play around with other writting schemes, your very talented.

This poem is soooo awesome! I really liked it! It was not forced the flow was perfection! GREAT JOB!

PLEASE R/R/C rose colored glasses, and here I am!!
-thanks-
ann

Wow... so sad, powerful and emotional. I'm sorry if this is true... Great write. 5/5

Wow, i love all the poems ive read so far and this is no exeption. you have the talent that makes your poems sucxh a pleasure to read, keep writing
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Awww.. that was so sad. I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't really relate, but it must be very hard. The poem was very good the flow ans rhyming were good as always. Keep writting.

Cayce x

Aww, nice poem. I'm running out of things to say! Your flow and rhythm are always immaculate. The only problem here is,

Now in the casket, still you lye

Lie not Lye

Other than that, beautiful poetry, well penned.

Peace. [Sole]