Now that's what I like to hear from you!!!!! I love it! Good job sweety! 5/5.

love and miss ya bunches
ravyn

Beautiful, Jordan! Truly lovely, and oh-so-true!

Wow, great work on this poem, i loved it. It's good that you had someone to push you to be stronger and that now you can tell that person "no more" and that you don't need them. I loved it.

Good job

--Steph

Over coming the hate of others is cause for much celebration. Good poem, though I know the words come from a hurt heart. I love you Ally!!!!!!! 5/5

Ravyn