Wow, this was incredible. I love the intense feeling you portray for the readers, its wonderfully descriptive.
5/5

Wow this is really good . i like it a lot . you have talent, so keep writing. if you need to talk i'm here for you :]. 5/5

Such talent, dear Sarah!!! Really mind-blowing!! I'm just thrilled that i could read this....I'm in Virginia right now looking for houses so I'm at a hotel with my family and I snuck on the hotel's computer lol!!! But I just had to read this...if you write anything else and I don't get around to commenting, please understand!!! AWESOME, SARAH!!!!

Oh wow. I just loved this poem. And I can relate to the feelings you put into this poem. I ecpesially loved the part :

"The blanket cannot suffice me
I toss and turn in mental pain
Darkness forever hurts my mind
And my thoughts drive me insane"

It really gave me chills when I wrote it. You are one of the most talented poets on this site. Great job. Keep it up;)

Wow. The only word that my mind will successfully form for an explanation. 5/5! Great description, an awesome piece. Keep writing!

Wow---intense poem---Im totally speechless....absolutely amazing poem-it was perfect. No doubt a 5/5