Death

by Green M&M   Jun 29, 2006


Dark Cold Filled with hate,
Choosing who lives or dies,
Holding their hand telling them to go to heaven or hell,
Wearing the long black robe with the tall syth,
Never stopping or taking a breath,
Showing the way to a new destination,
Death is every where we just don't see him,
All we see is his work and the souls he takes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I liked this one, but it was a bit choppy, just work on your flow, you have a nice write here

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Not bad! I really enjoyed reading this, even if it was depressing. But it was a great poem, I`ve got no complaints. Keep it up!

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    That is a very good poem. The flow was nice and you have good descriptions in it--5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Great poem really good, I don't know how to explain it. It is detailed well!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow dark but deep! Very good... it was short, but i liked it... maybe a little more, but i get how you wanted it to be short... bravo!

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