by Darien
Hmm, "Dark Cold (what?) Filled with hate?.. I just didn't know what you were referring to.. |
by Mousie
Wow dark but deep! Very good... it was short, but i liked it... maybe a little more, but i get how you wanted it to be short... bravo! |
by AnnMarie
Great poem really good, I don't know how to explain it. It is detailed well! |
That is a very good poem. The flow was nice and you have good descriptions in it--5/5 |
Not bad! I really enjoyed reading this, even if it was depressing. But it was a great poem, I`ve got no complaints. Keep it up! |
by Mousie
I liked this one, but it was a bit choppy, just work on your flow, you have a nice write here |