by LaurenLiz Jun 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She screams out to the world |
Great poem! i love the topic of it and its so true. There are so many oblivious people-or just people that cant see behind the mask. You did a great job keeping the readers attention with the poem, and i like how you went between two people-it definately added some interest to the poem-5/5 keep writing! |