These lines girl, are awesome,
i always ask them myself

"Sometimes i question
if there ever was an us"

i like it, makes me want to check your work out some more. kp it up.

Great word use and it definatley portrayed a real relationship. u should add some commas and periods and stuff so people know when to pause and when to not cuase at some points it got confusing. i really liked it though.

Nice rhytem..having this all one thing makes it hard to read..so sum people might look at it and not bother to read it...just giving u advice..but i liked it keep it up hunn.

Lissa xoxo