Devils sickness

by angel eyes   Jun 29, 2006


The devil takes my soul
the flames soar around my heart

his dark black eyes tearing me apart
his wrath becoming of me

me heart blackens with every word he speaks

his spells blackening my eyes with anger

my soul takes flight into hell
it sees nothing but satan

his bloody teeth smile at me
his knife splitting me in half

my life burning in hell for all eternity

and you never coming, bringing me out alive again

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Nice job, very emphatic :P

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I LOVE UR WORK> its sos amazing..u r a TRUE poet..i cna feel the passion hat went into every single word..wow

    Lissa oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was a very strong and dark poem. i liked the descriptions of things like "bloody teeth" and so forth. it didnt really have a flow and was choppy but overall a good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    This was a very powerful write for sure, I have felt this way before..its a great poem, I am sur emany will like this one. Timothy r

  • 18 years ago

    by Angela Cameron

    I luv the way u get into detail!... if u ever want to... IDK, whtever just add me...

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