Hey I think you could be a really strong poet if you paid a bit more attention to the rythem of your poems. Follow a beat through out your entire poem and remember that if the word your ryming has one syllable and you can't find another one syllable if you have to place a two syllable word after the one syllable word, go back and a another 1 syllable to the already one syllable word. if you dont get this, email me and I'll explain. p.s. i'm a big fan.

xox leah

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