Gentle Breath

by Momentary Relapse   Jun 29, 2006


The soft breath caressing
Gentle
A slow throb
Discomfort
Another endeavor
Remember that it's so hard
Gasp
Another lie
The gentle breath coming close
Softly moving
Soft
Embrace
Quiet
Never again
The gentle stir of the thoughts
Leaving as a thief steals the night
Gentle
A quiet moment
Distressing memory
Reminiscent lies falling asleep
Breathe
Another breath taken
Fallen asleep
Broken
The soft breath escaping
No more

*compiled without really much thought and such. Not really too great and the title really needs some work. Suggestions?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    This really isn't all that bad.. (well least imo)

    it has many parts, in which i really, really liked.. so 5/5

    keep 'em coming
    jm

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Thanks Hun :)

  • 18 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey
    thankyou for commenting on my poem.
    i really like the use of describing words in this piece, ity adds mood and character.
    thanyou again
    greta
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    No suggestions.
    not my kind of poetry by eah to their own.
    each*
    anyway
    keep it up and keep smilin'
    ~Emma