by cassie Jun 29, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Life is a burning candle |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is really good. You are right "Life is a burning candle that eventually ends" i like how you put that everything has to end in a creative way! :) |
Cassie -- |
Holy Moly Cassie! I honestly truly didn't think you could write like this...this is a really good one and Idon't really think this one needs any work. Great even though it reminds me of Brent and makes me sad *sniff sniff* but anyways I ecsp. like the end. |
by cassie
Can u please rate mine and tell me what I need to work on, so I can improve on my poems? |