Just a little something...with a few lines potraying my reality...but u forget about that and tell me what u think...it is actually very long and i had to cut it into 2 parts...i have'nt uploaded the 2nd part yet.....i dont know if i will.....depends on the response.....i dont expect it to be big...it's just my second poem.

Very very good.
it created a chilling mental picture in my mind.