Comments : Bloody Paradise

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Daaaannnnnngg yooooooo
    that poem was...amazing
    Heart like ive never seen before
    words that flowed perfectly
    Rhyme was excellent
    all around great job
    and the message was so sad, and im sorry if this really happend, such a tragedy, i hope things go for the best, and you get a man that will love you like no other man can..
    keep it up
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Lynn

    I really like this poem its very well writen i feel like i can relate to it so much i know exactly what you mean when i read this .. keep writing girl

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    U rock another dark gem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I usually don't read long poems but i could'nd stop reading this one it's so full
    of emtion so powerful I CAN ACTUALLY
    feel your anger 5/5 excellent piece