Aftermath

by Levi   Jun 30, 2006


Slowly trudging through the water and blood,
The entire army is dead lying in the reddened mud.
The sky is dark and the fire's burn.
Seeing this makes my stomach churn.
Men I once fought among, now gone.
For their families, and new son's born,
Crying in the wind and rain,
Having nothing but their dying pain.

After all has come and gone,
We sit and hope for a new dawn.
Lone survivors of wars once fought,
Feeling just lost and distort.
These scars will remain until the end,
Inside and out, remembrance since then.

For their lives these brave men gave,
They'll live on from beyond the grave.

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  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Wow i really like this poem of urs.
    made me want to sit and remember and thank all those soldiers that gave their lives for peace and love....i know ill never forget them and to never take for granted the days i have to live because if it wasnt for those men i wouldnt be heree and neither would u....nice flow it was great i give it a 5/5

    well done
    keep up the good work

    plzz also comment on some of my poems new or which ever ones catch ur fancy
    :D

    peace!!

  • 18 years ago

    by C

    Aay ,nice poem 5/5
    keep up da gd work ;)